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  • 11-01-2017
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DOES THIS MAKE SENSE? "Therefore, the only obstacle in my way was to make sure that Romeo was informed of the plan without having anyone find out about how on Thursday Juliet’s funeral will be held and not her wedding."

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epichamza305
epichamza305 epichamza305
  • 11-01-2017
Not really. Try using more commas
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jlog
jlog jlog
  • 11-01-2017
Use less words or make it two sentences
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